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What would you do if to your doorstep, I came?
Would you greet me with joy, or turn away in shame?
Would you jump for joy and crush me in loving embrace?
Or would you glare at me and slam the door in my face?

Would you want to run away with me, into the moonlight?
For us the book on love is something I am trying to rewrite
It may be arrogant to assume so, but we would be unique
We could run away to South America, maybe even buy a cacique

We could just lie together on the beach, in the heat of the sun
Being together we can guarantee everything in life will be done
I can't promise that it will be a life of big houses and fancy cars
But it will be full of simpler pleasures, like dancing under the stars

You're the one with unconditional love I would like to imbue
We could travel from town to town, working only when we need to
We could travel from Rio to Sydney and all the way back to Rome
Or we could simply settle down, have kids and set up our own home

If you choose we can walk away from here without a backward glance
All you have to do for this kind of life my love is to just give me a chance
It could all yours.
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ThinkingPanda Featured By Owner May 29, 2011
People undervalue the simple things. Love is stronger than anything. :3
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 30, 2011   Writer
Indeed :)
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TinaLeeM Featured By Owner May 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"But it will be full of simpler pleasures, like dancing under the stars" Beautiful, another thing I have always wanted to do :D
Amazing poem! So sweet, I Love it :heart:
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 25, 2011   Writer
You shall do it soon enough I am sure :)
Thank you I am glad you liked it :)
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TinaLeeM Featured By Owner May 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're always welcome :D :rose:
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner May 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i love this poem. usually love poems bore me, but this one was great! :D keep writing.
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 25, 2011   Writer
Thank you for your kind words I am glad you liked it :)
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LindseyRaeSays Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely beautiful. You took the words out of my mouth.
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011   Writer
Thank you :D
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ObliviousDolfin Featured By Owner May 24, 2011
so beautiful :)
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011   Writer
Thank you :D
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ObliviousDolfin Featured By Owner May 25, 2011
You're welcome :3
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artemis01nenefan Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poems are so sweet ^^♥
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011   Writer
Thank you :)
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artemis01nenefan Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome love :3
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katjameow Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Hobbyist
"I can't promise that it will be a life of big houses and fancy cars
But it will be full of simpler pleasures, like dancing under the stars"

I like this part so much :) Great work!
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011   Writer
Thank you :) I am glad you enjoyed it :)
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silverwolverine Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Didn't know you wanted to go to South America ;P

Again, a well written poem :meow:
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011   Writer
I want to see the world someday (:,

Thank you :)
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silverwolverine Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh I know that xD

Welcome!
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 24, 2011   Writer
Dam you reply quickly D:
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silverwolverine Featured By Owner May 24, 2011  Student General Artist
:lol:
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