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My time here is at long last coming to an end
For the next part of my life what do you recommend
It has come to a point now where I am counting the days
I can't wait to leave, but I dread to think we're parting ways

Although I will come to miss those I have come to care for
Though this is something most of them are going to ignore
Though it doesn't bother me, as so few I truly care about
Though talking about it is something that I will go without

My inner most thoughts to only one person I portray
There is ever so much to you that I wish to convey

But I don't have the guts, so quietly I'll walk away
It is now time for me to walk away.
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LostEmoAngel Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Very beautiful, very touching, and very very relatable.. ^.^
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Writer
Thank you :)
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconcryingplz: its so touching so sads
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011   Writer
Yeah, I'm both looking forward to leaving school, but I am dreading the thought that I am going to be alone to fend for myself in the world too =/
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Yeah i can see how that could be a lil scary...You'll be just fine : )
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011   Writer
Glad you understand :) I hope you're right :)
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Student General Artist
M'dear dont you know the laws of being a woman? A woman is always right, even when she is wrong~ Haha ^^
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011   Writer
My goodness I hope my friend doesn't read that you said that, she'll never let me hear the end of lol
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Haha, she should know it, so tell me :p
"If a man is alone in the forest and no one can hear him...Is he still wrong?" :giggle:
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011   Writer
Thing is she set that as her facebook status before >.<
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LovexLife Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
Very nice and well thought out. Love it!!! <3!less then three!
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011   Writer
Thank you :D
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LovexLife Featured By Owner May 13, 2011
ur welcome
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C3POwn Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
wow, for some reason i started singing this poem and well, it would so work out in a song, something like punk (more like rise against to be precise) or something more quiet like with piano, or something ^^
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011   Writer
I like the suggestion :D I might try and write a tune for it whilst playing guitar later :D
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C3POwn Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
you do that, i'm sure it'll sound just amazing ;)
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011   Writer
Let's hope so :D
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Ustukushii0708 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
It all leads to this....
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011   Writer
To what? :S
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Ustukushii0708 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
haha:giggle:
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aphyrodite Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful <3 I feel this within my soul ahaha
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Blueturtle9 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011   Writer
Thank you :)
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aphyrodite Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem <3
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